Opposition second speaker, notion is "Fairy Tales are of any advantage to children of today"

So I have the debate finals on this in 4 hours, can y’all help me review it and see what aspects require change to improve the effect. If possible, could you also mention possible loopholes and POI’s that can be made against my speech in certain areas, as well as a possible rebuttal? Tysm if so. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vrsLre2BGJFHC5FbLZbQEExX27Ix3HeSP2HSqVxXba8/edit?usp=sharing